Wednesday, 23 March 2016

Camp week

WALT:write a persuasive argument  
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Description:we have been doing some persuasive writing it was really fun but a bit hard 
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Feedback:you did great in using persuasive writing Mikaela well done.
Izzy
Feed forward:try and add more description on your next blog post.
Izzy

1 comment:

  1. I really like your persuasive writing and that you included all of your post criteria! Maybe next time add more to the description about what you did.
    Madison

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