Wednesday, 13 April 2016

Advertisement

W.A.L.T.
Make a advertisement





Description. I did really well on the descriptive words and I got it done on the day that we were meant to be finishing wich was good.
Feedback I think you did good nice description. 
Feed fordFeed ford I think you did great but maybe make it a bit more clear from poppy 
Target.




Thursday, 7 April 2016

Two stars and a wish

W.A.L.T.
Writing two stars and a wish 
Description :this is my two stars and a wish the star means what you have been doing awesome 
Feedback : Maybe  next time you could make the picture a bit bigger. 
Feed ford :I love it colours and the description is great. Hopefully  you achieve that goal .kate 





Wednesday, 6 April 2016

My whakapapa

W.A.L.T.make a family tree
Description:I did amazing doesn't it look great.it was hard to makes because I had to do lots of names